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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 4 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
Very nice composition, well exposed and the colors appear correct. My only nit is the clipping of the arch on the right and left side. |
Oct 23rd |
| 4 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
I like the composition and the fact that the three people are looking left does not bother me. I noticed the buildings in the back have their lights on and I wonder if you would have waited twenty minutes if those light may have become more prominent. What I would like to see is some drastic work on the sky and the water to make it pop. I darkened the sky and reduced the overall brightness to make the lights on the building appear natural. I also worked on the water with a graduated filter with some added clarity and Dehaze. My last step was to use the Adjustment brush in Camera Raw to brighten up the church and the three ladies. |
Oct 23rd |
 |
| 4 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
The painterly effect is interesting. I would crop from the top and bottom to create a panoramic effect where the diagonal line almost cuts the image in half. Just a thought. |
Oct 23rd |
| 4 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
Excellent use of IR. Those old Nikon D70's make good IR cameras. I agree with Isaac on the crop. The rock formation on the right side is a distraction. One thing I would like to have seen done is to tone down the foreground a bit. |
Oct 23rd |
| 4 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
Joe, the crop worked. As I look at the final crop, I wonder if some of the surrounding cedar shingles would add to the image. The crop as is does have an abstract look to it. |
Oct 23rd |
| 4 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
Issac, I questioned that. And decided not to remove it. I submitted a monochrome print at Club the other night. It scored a perfect 27 points. When we discussed the print after, many people had not seen it. |
Oct 6th |
6 comments - 0 replies for Group 4
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| 44 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
Here's the modified version. I toned down the white boat and reflection. Comments please. |
Oct 23rd |
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| 44 |
Oct 17 |
Reply |
Yes, that white boat bothered me too. I plan on going back and perhaps that white boat will be gone. I also thought of painting it another color. |
Oct 17th |
1 comment - 1 reply for Group 44
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7 comments - 1 reply Total
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