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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 40 |
Sep 19 |
Comment |
Thank you all for the warm welcome to the group and helpful critique. :)) |
Sep 25th |
| 40 |
Sep 19 |
Comment |
For me this is a nice arrangement of some items on a workshop bench. I like the colour of the lamp and the different shapes and textures throughout the image and I find the composition to be pleasing.
It is hard for me to tell what the main subject is. If it is the lamp, then it is fine that the other objects are out of focus, but if the group as a whole is the intention of the image, then I would prefer to see all the items in focus, perhaps using a narrower DOF or a closer arrangement.
I was wondering if a subtle vignette would draw more attention to the subject? I am not sure if its my eyes or the bricks but perhaps the image could do with a smidge of straightening. |
Sep 22nd |
| 40 |
Sep 19 |
Comment |
To me, this is an interesting image of a child enjoying the lake before the sun goes down. I like how it makes me imagine the fun he has had causing his reluctance to leave and go home.
As such, I find the bright sky distracting from the main subject and prefer the original. I like that the bit of colour on the water helps to draw my eye to the subject.
I do not think that the foreground adds much to the image and would crop some out which to me would also improve the composition, placing the subject on one of the 1/3 lines. |
Sep 21st |
| 40 |
Sep 19 |
Comment |
To me this is a nice street shot highlighting behaviour in our modern world. To me it looks like it was a dull day which is brightened by the rich reds throughout the image. I think the exposure is good and your chosen aperture works well for this shot keeping the main subjects in focus. |
Sep 17th |
| 40 |
Sep 19 |
Comment |
At first glance I thought the image was overprocessed but I actually like the look you have achieved - it reminds me of book illustrations many years ago, supported also by the "old fashioned" subject matter.
To me the crop you have chosen is the best with what you had to work with.
I like the rich colours and the expressions on the subjects - ever so slightly smiling.
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Sep 17th |
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