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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 57 |
May 23 |
Comment |
I really like the softness of the water you captured. This is something I have tried and it eludes me. I really like the composition as well, but the background bothers me a little. I am wondering if it should be more in focus. |
May 23rd |
| 57 |
May 23 |
Comment |
The front flower is perfect. I would play around with the composition a bit as well. I also like things in threes. Next time, you could either play with them in the vase or turn the vase (I do this a lot) or walk around the vase if possible and get different angles. You could also change your perspective. Sit a little lower, etc. |
May 23rd |
| 57 |
May 23 |
Comment |
I agree with Cindy's crop as well. Since you have it cropped from the top already, I would crop it off on the side. You could also punch up the saturation a bit. Very nice, in-focus image. |
May 23rd |
| 57 |
May 23 |
Comment |
I love it! I read through your explanation twice and I still have no idea how you did it, but I think you ended up with a great shot! Her face is in focus, which is what you want. You can feel the softness of her hair; also what you want. I like the background color you ultimately chose, as well. It was definitely worth the pain. |
May 23rd |
| 57 |
May 23 |
Comment |
Great focus on the flower. I like the way you blurred the background as well. It looks like an abstract painting. If anything, I would get rid of that one little dead leaf on the bottom right. |
May 23rd |
| 57 |
May 23 |
Comment |
I definitely agree about darkening the background, because although it is obvious what the subject is, you definitely eliminated some background noise and distractions. I love the juxtaposition of the leaves from the bottom pointing up while the petals are pointing down. |
May 23rd |
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