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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 30 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
Beautiful capture. I agree with Dorinda. It feels a little dark all over. I would try lightning the foreground area. |
Jan 13th |
| 30 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
I think it is a great capture. I don't think you need to darken the background any more. You have some nice darkening already on the top by having the building in shadow. I don't think you need to darken around his feet. |
Jan 13th |
| 30 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
I think this is a nice image. My thought would be to crop in on the flower with the bee. I lost t he bee until I read your description it was there. Also, because of the time of day/weather conditions (very sunny), the light and shadow on the image is harsh and a little distracting. Here is what I mean (not perfect). |
Jan 13th |
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| 30 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
Interesting shot. I read everyone else's comments. I agree it would be nice to either add some dirt road, or crop in a little more on the left, so the round part of the grass doesn't hit the edge of the image. I also like the idea of brightening up the colors. I agree an HDR feel may work well. |
Jan 13th |
| 30 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
I have never taken pictures of the moon. And, I think this is an amazing shot. I wouldn't change anything. |
Jan 13th |
| 30 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
SO, I am going to go complete opposite of everyone here, and sort of channel what Jon said. I actually refer your monochrome original. I think adding the color is distracting in the foreground area because it just isn't working with the mist. I think if you worked the original as a black and white and just sharpened the falls themselves and leave the house more fogged over it might work. I find the color version has too many distracting elements. |
Jan 13th |
6 comments - 0 replies for Group 30
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| 57 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
This is a neat shot, and I really had to look at your original to see what you meant by 2 mirrors. Looking at the finished image, I felt like you crouched down in the street on a damp night and took a shot of these candles that were lining the street. The front candle has a bit of noise going on around it. I'm not sure if that is adjustable. I wouldn't crop it out, because I think the image will lose something. Love the experimenting. |
Jan 13th |
| 57 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
Great shot! I agree with Cindy. I would lighten up the stem and maybe a little of the flower on the left side as well. I do love the soft colors too. |
Jan 13th |
| 57 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
I like the abstract quality you achieved here with the lines and the flow of movement. I would do something with the upper right corner though. It is distracting. I would try cropping out at least a little, but not to take so much away you lose the essence of the image. |
Jan 13th |
| 57 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
I think natural portraits, especially of kids are great. It really shows off her personality and who she is. Not seeing the original, I think moving strands of hair of her face was a good idea, but I wouldn't "brush" her hair too much. It's who she is. I like the white vignette. I would try to lighten up those two yellow areas on either side of her. |
Jan 13th |
| 57 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
I agree this background is much better than the one in the original. I like how the background is red as well, it gives the image the festive setting. I also like how you brightened up his beard and made it whiter and a little more clear. |
Jan 13th |
| 57 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
I love this image on the black background. It really enhances the dandelion fluff. If it weren't solid you would lose the beauty of flower. I also think it is more interesting, that some of the dandelion is missing. |
Jan 13th |
6 comments - 0 replies for Group 57
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12 comments - 0 replies Total
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