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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 30 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Nice. Beautiful flower. I would crop in. A square crop. I love the pink against the jade green background. I would get rid of the bee too. It's not in focus and distracting |
Nov 12th |
| 30 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Interesting pattern of lines. I thought this was a man made object..something spongy, until I read your description. I like what is in focus and what is not and don't feel it looks out of focus. What kind of succulent? It seems very textured for a succulent. What was the lighting you used? |
Nov 12th |
| 30 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
I think this is a great image. The composition is perfect and the tonal range is great. I like how suer focused it is and you can see the extrude of his skin. Very well done. |
Nov 12th |
| 30 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
I think it is perfect for black and white, but it feels a little flat to me. I would try getting a better range in tone? Not sure what the original looked like, so maybe that is hard to do. |
Nov 12th |
| 30 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
I would crop in from the right and crop it where there is a break in the tree formations. I think that will make the composition more interesting. As Judy said, the water isn't very interesting and the focus should be more on the bridge. |
Nov 12th |
| 30 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Interesting subject. I had to look twice to see that it wasn't an abject floating, but a rock that collected wet leaves. I love the softness of the water you achieved against the sharper focused rock. It makes for a very ethereal subject. The yellow reflection off to the right keeps drawing my attention. I would consider content awarding that out so it is the same color as the water. |
Nov 12th |
6 comments - 0 replies for Group 30
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| 57 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
I love the simplicity and the elegance you created by using this technique. I had a light pad somewhere as well. You've motivated me to go find it!! |
Nov 12th |
| 57 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
I like this. I like the colors and the patters created by the bark. I would even try cropping in so just the right side of the image is there and really push the abstract. |
Nov 12th |
| 57 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
I think you have achieved great focus here and I like the background blur. I agree the white is distracting. I wouldn't crop it out though, because I think it will compromise the composition. I would just make the white the same as the red. |
Nov 12th |
| 57 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
I think your composition is very interesting and artistic. I also would have liked to see more in focus. I think the neck of the guitar would be great if it more in focus and then you can blur out toward the bottom of the guitar. If at all possible, I would have removed the strap that is holding it on to the stand too. |
Nov 12th |
| 57 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Very nice an an interesting subject.. I like your technique of placing it on a black background. I like the subtlety of losing the leaf down below as well. Nicely done. |
Nov 12th |
| 57 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
I ave never seen a cats like this either. It is an interesting subject. I would crop in as well and make it a very abstract piece. It works especially if you everything is really sharp. |
Nov 12th |
6 comments - 0 replies for Group 57
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12 comments - 0 replies Total
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