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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 30 |
Sep 19 |
Comment |
This is a great image and scene. I would not crop in more but maybe lighten up around the top edge slightly. Not a lot, but it feels like the edges are closing in on her a little too much. Especially with the curve of the round mirror acting as a frame naturally. |
Sep 17th |
| 30 |
Sep 19 |
Comment |
Great shot and what an expression. I can't tell if he is annoyed you are taking his picture or curious. I wold try to adjust the contrast a little. The image seems flat and he, as the main subject, should jump out a little more. |
Sep 17th |
| 30 |
Sep 19 |
Comment |
Great shot. I would also not crop it, however I would try to lighten it slightly. It is a little dark. |
Sep 17th |
| 30 |
Sep 19 |
Comment |
Nice moody scene. I'm not sure how big the room is, but I would have liked to see more of the chair. The bed post is awkwardly blocking it so I wish you were able to have shot a little more to the right. I like your black and white treatment of the image. |
Sep 17th |
4 comments - 0 replies for Group 30
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| 57 |
Sep 19 |
Comment |
Nice composition and great background blur. It is tough to shoot in full sun because you get blown out highlights, but if stand in front of it you might not get the composition you wanted. |
Sep 17th |
| 57 |
Sep 19 |
Comment |
I definitely agree with he crop and the blurred background so you focus in on the dragonfly. However, the whole image feels grainy to me. That may be a result of cropping in as opposed to shooting closer up. |
Sep 17th |
| 57 |
Sep 19 |
Comment |
I agree with Cindy's suggestion. I like the image and I couldn't pin point what was bothering me until I read what she wrote. You're eye does tend to get drawn to the top and it almost has an HDR feel to it. I would pull that back as well. I think the only thing that could have possible made a difference was if there were more table behind the glass forcing you to only look at the glass because there isn't enough going on in the background. |
Sep 17th |
| 57 |
Sep 19 |
Comment |
Great composition and the bee and center of the flower are in perfect focus. I wouldn't change anything. |
Sep 17th |
| 57 |
Sep 19 |
Comment |
I think the composition is perfect. I like the curve of the leaf the butterfly is sitting on and how the end that is slightly browned sort of mimics the shape of the butterfly wing. The top feels dark to me. Was that due to vignetting? Maybe pull it back a little or widen the area that is lighter. |
Sep 17th |
5 comments - 0 replies for Group 57
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9 comments - 0 replies Total
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