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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 30 |
Nov 17 |
Comment |
I think this is such a fun image! I like the composition and I think Dorinda's suggestion of enhancing the colors a bit works, but I wouldn't crop it. |
Nov 11th |
| 30 |
Nov 17 |
Comment |
I really like the angle you captured on the boat. I wouldn't crop it. I like how it is sort of "bam" right in your face and I think if you crop it you lose some of those lovely curves. Love the colors. It looks amazing for minimal processing. |
Nov 11th |
| 30 |
Nov 17 |
Comment |
I think it is a great abstract image and works well as a black and white (although I would love to see the color version as well). I agree it is a little slanted, and I would straighten that out. If your assignment was reflections, then I think you have done well, by capturing interesting reflections that contrast with the straight lines on the building. |
Nov 11th |
| 30 |
Nov 17 |
Comment |
The sky is blah. I find Leonid's sky interesting, but it does look unnatural too me, in this scene. In respect to your won comment about how that wasn't really the mood of the scene at the time, I think you need to decide what you want out of the image. If you want the very dreary cold field, then go with Robert's suggestion. If you want to cheer it up, so to speak, then I would combine Robert's and Leonid's suggestions. |
Nov 11th |
| 30 |
Nov 17 |
Comment |
The clouds in the sky definitely look a little "noisy". I don't know that I would crop it out though. I like the proportions you created in the composition with the horizon line at the bottom of the mountain range. I think if you crop too much off the sky you will upset the proportions. I also think you've got great leading lines created by the curve of the river. |
Nov 11th |
| 30 |
Nov 17 |
Comment |
I think this is a great image. It tells a story. I love how you cropped it. I definitely that helps make the image more compelling, and I think the elements that would have been in the background would have ultimately taken away from the image. |
Nov 11th |
6 comments - 0 replies for Group 30
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| 57 |
Nov 17 |
Comment |
I think you captured a great image. I think the blurred background works. My only suggestion would be to crop it in such away that the dragonflies are even more off center, to the left. |
Nov 11th |
| 57 |
Nov 17 |
Comment |
I really like this image. It tells a story and it is a snippet of time. I think the style and composition are perfect. I agree with Cindy, in that you can see where your focus on the cookie is, because that is so clear. I don't mind the backside of the cookie blurring off, but it would have been better if the fork near the cookie was more in focus as well. I don't think this detracts form the image, but it would have kicked it up a notch. Well done. |
Nov 11th |
| 57 |
Nov 17 |
Comment |
I love the color you captured in the flower. I think there is great blur in the background as well. I also like the composition of the way the flower is coming in on an angle. Is that how you captured it, or did you crop it that way? I get where Cindy is coming from regarding the background. There is a little bit of competition between the purple and the green. I am also invested in learning more about the new program you are using.
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Nov 11th |
| 57 |
Nov 17 |
Comment |
I love fern fronds as a subject, but I usually have a difficult time capturing them the way I want to. I like how you isolated it from the background, but I would be interested in seeing it if it was even darker; remove all the background and leave on black. In order to for that to be successful though, I think the entire fern should be in sharp focus. |
Nov 11th |
4 comments - 0 replies for Group 57
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10 comments - 0 replies Total
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