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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 14 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
Hi Kamal - This is a beautiful capture. The composition and silhouettes in the setting sun create a nice atmosphere and lovely energy. The story is well told. Best - |
Oct 21st |
| 14 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
Hi Xiao - I think your additional changes have helped the processed image. There is a nice glow on the model's face that I like. The book though still needs some work and I find it distracting - it's just too stark and creates a feeling that the lighting is emanating from the book. If it were mine, I would change the color of the green shirt or dull it down on the gentleman in the background . . . cloning out the couple, as suggested by Karen, might also work. Your original fixes to the dress, rock and the area around the model's foot are quite successful. You've improved on the original nicely. |
Oct 21st |
| 14 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
Hi Tom - Well executed! Really nice impact and composition - I particularly like how the black background obscures some of the flower's edges so one doesn't know where the background ends and the flower begins adding interest and a lovely atmosphere. Your "playing" in Photoshop was quite successful. |
Oct 21st |
| 14 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
Hi Greg - A nice close-up that captures your subject's intent focus. I like the blurring of the background on this image which brings your grandson front and center by adding some depth. I agree that the white lines are a bit stark and distracting - an easy fix. A bit more space in front of your grandson would be a nice - I wouldn't add much to that left side though. Overall lighting is well captured. Best - |
Oct 21st |
| 14 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
Hi Karen - I have nothing to add beyond what others have contributed technically. Nicely done. Your contribution to such an important life event is significant as it documents those shared memories that will be treasured for years to come. It was also made special because of your personal relationship with this family. Congrats! |
Oct 21st |
| 14 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
Hi Ingrid - An interesting experiment. Beautiful color and creative design/composition. I agree that Tom's suggestion would add impact and hone in on a center of interest beyond the whole. The black background contributes a style and the lighting is well done. Thanks for sharing. |
Oct 21st |
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