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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 30 |
Jun 21 |
Comment |
A very interesting subject. I do agree that increased background blur is the way to go. We still need to be able to see the background items, but both Judy and Leonids versions draw our attention to the central subject better. |
Jun 5th |
| 30 |
Jun 21 |
Reply |
I like Leonid's suggestion. |
Jun 5th |
| 30 |
Jun 21 |
Comment |
First: cute kid! I think you did a great job of getting in the catcher, the batter and the ball. Having spent many years photographing our youngest grandson at these ball games, I know how hard it is to do that. Baseball is difficult: fences, do you include the people in the background? Do you blur them? What angle do you shoot from? etc. The only suggestion I have is to remove the yellow cast. Otherwise, great shot, tells the story! Our little guy is now 21 and his college team just came in second in the NAIA national championship this week! So your image really touched me. |
Jun 5th |
| 30 |
Jun 21 |
Reply |
Thanks for the suggestion, Leonid. I think the consensus is definitely to darken the tree and possibly some leaves a little more. |
Jun 5th |
| 30 |
Jun 21 |
Comment |
Judy's version is more of what I had in mind, but the waterline still looks tilted. Also, I agree with a color change. |
Jun 4th |
| 30 |
Jun 21 |
Reply |
Jody, Thanks for the suggestion. I had wondered if the tree was too bright. I didn't mean to cause confusion by the title. Both the small purplish and large green leaves are those of two varieties of violets. There are no violets actually blooming in the image. As a backyard gardener in the PNW, I forget that not everyone would recognize that! |
Jun 4th |
| 30 |
Jun 21 |
Reply |
I can do that, thanks Robert. |
Jun 4th |
| 30 |
Jun 21 |
Comment |
I enjoy seeing geometric designs in nature. I would like to see the beach color a little less saturated. See my example. |
Jun 3rd |
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| 30 |
Jun 21 |
Comment |
This is a great capture of parent and chick. I, too, felt the colors could be improved. In LR I warmed up the colors and darkened the browns in the background. |
Jun 3rd |
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| 30 |
Jun 21 |
Comment |
I like the concept of framing the shot with the flowers, but I still don't think it is working in this image. For me there is too much empty sky in the middle of the image. Also, the waterline on the far side appears to slant to the left. |
Jun 3rd |
| 30 |
Jun 21 |
Comment |
I'm always happy to see when we try something out of the norm for us. This is a great place to share this work. I agree, since there is really nothing of interest in the sky, I would crop it significantly. As the gentleman said to the barber, "take a little of the sides" too! BW works well. I'm guessing this was taken mid day?
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Jun 3rd |
7 comments - 4 replies for Group 30
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| 42 |
Jun 21 |
Comment |
Robert, I like what you did with the crop. I think I would enjoy it more if the white petals had a little less texture showing.
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Jun 3rd |
1 comment - 0 replies for Group 42
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8 comments - 4 replies Total
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