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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 29 |
May 20 |
Comment |
Bill, Great stop action shot. Love the expression on the kids' face. Because he seems to be continuing to move a little to the left, I would reduce your left hand crop by about 1/3 to give him space to "move". Looks like fun!
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May 6th |
1 comment - 0 replies for Group 29
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| 30 |
May 20 |
Reply |
Now that you have gone to all that work, I think I do prefer the original. (sorry!) Or.. perhaps somewhere in between. While I like the blurr in the revised version, the background light is flat. So with apologies, stick with the first and maybe just desaturate it very very very slightly.
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May 19th |
| 30 |
May 20 |
Reply |
This crop works much better. Now it all seems to "fit".
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May 9th |
| 30 |
May 20 |
Reply |
I could go either way, but in the version I suggested, the mast tilting right makes a triangular point with the bow of the boat, forming an arrow pointing right. I just like it better. As Leonid has presented, it works either way. |
May 5th |
| 30 |
May 20 |
Comment |
Reading Judy's suggestion, I agree that if you cropped from the right, far enough to eliminate the righthand flower, it would help. Make it more of a square or vertical crop than horizontal. Then, I find the trees and tulips seem to fit together better. |
May 5th |
| 30 |
May 20 |
Reply |
Thanks for sharing the original. You did a good job disguising it, but I'm afraid I still find it takes away from the bird. As I suggested before, can you replace the background? |
May 5th |
| 30 |
May 20 |
Comment |
I love exploring nature this way. I think this would be a good base for some creative processing. Would love to see what you come up with. |
May 5th |
| 30 |
May 20 |
Reply |
Judy, I would encourage you to try it. I have seen it done with backgrounds added which I will be trying.
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May 5th |
| 30 |
May 20 |
Comment |
Lovely image. I like the placement of the boat in the image but (and I rarely do this) I would recommend flipping it horizontally so the boat is heading left-to-right. I did lighten the sails and boat little to help them stand out from the background. Also, I enhanced the saturation of the water a little. I did not want to over do the saturation, just bring a little of the beautiful color back into the image. |
May 4th |
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| 30 |
May 20 |
Comment |
It is a good photo for 30 seconds. I like the perspective very much. Similar to Judy's image, I find that the background tree interferes with my enjoyment of the tulips. So, in this case, a top-down view of the tulips might have been a better option.
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May 4th |
| 30 |
May 20 |
Comment |
The bird is amazingly sharp. I agree that the background is competing with the bird visually. I would add more blur and desaturate the background. Or add a completely different background???
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May 4th |
| 30 |
May 20 |
Comment |
Good subject. Tells a story of the empty beaches. I straightened your horizon and did a slight crop. Not sure If I prefer my crop your yours? |
May 4th |
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| 30 |
May 20 |
Comment |
I probably should not refer to this one as a city, more just a collection of shiny objects. You do have to use your imagination. Also remember that buildings come in different shapes. Anyway, just something to play with. |
May 4th |
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| 30 |
May 20 |
Reply |
Thank you Beverly. As I mentioned, I got the idea from other posts I have see on the internet. Since this image, I have been playing with the idea even more. I like your idea of the tiny silver car. |
May 3rd |
7 comments - 6 replies for Group 30
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8 comments - 6 replies Total
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