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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 30 |
Mar 17 |
Comment |
Robert, I do like your revised version much better. It still gives me the feel of the starkness of winter and I find the bushes less bothersome in this version. |
Mar 23rd |
| 30 |
Mar 17 |
Reply |
Well done, Judy!
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Mar 8th |
| 30 |
Mar 17 |
Comment |
I saw a kid using one of these on America's Got Talent. It looks like so much fun! I like it without the hose as it adds mystery, the "how does he do that?". I'm suggesting a couple of changes: first, a different crop as it feels too centered; second, brighten the subject a little. I did a quick job on his face, legs, just as an example. See my version. Finally, I straightened the horizon. |
Mar 6th |
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| 30 |
Mar 17 |
Comment |
It definitely has a gloomy quality to it. I think I would prefer the solitary tree. For me, the other branches create too much visual clutter.
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Mar 6th |
| 30 |
Mar 17 |
Comment |
Judy I like your revised version better. How did it do at your photo club? A couple of suggestions from me: 1. clone out the light spot top center (dust? part of the bridge?). Using an 8 x 10 constraint, I cropped closer, eliminating most sof the sky areas and reducing the lower roadway. For me, that further enhances the curves of the overpass. Just a suggestion. |
Mar 6th |
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| 30 |
Mar 17 |
Comment |
The detail on this is amazing! I know I need to learn to do focus stacking as well, but have been rather lazy about learning. This gives me more resaon to pursue it. I'd like to see the tip of the bottom leaf included. Also, I like Robert's suggested image. Great job. |
Mar 6th |
| 30 |
Mar 17 |
Comment |
Having seen your work for awhile now, I know you do a great job with flowers. This one is not sharp enough for me. Also, I think I would prefer if the bottom three petals were cropped off the bottom, removing most of the stem. |
Mar 6th |
| 30 |
Mar 17 |
Comment |
I think you have a consensus regarding this image and I agree. A little too much of a good thing, but a great experiment. Personally I think the crop is just fine. I do agree about cloning out the green lights, bottom rt. |
Mar 6th |
7 comments - 1 reply for Group 30
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7 comments - 1 reply Total
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