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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 13 |
Jan 21 |
Comment |
Paul
This is a good example of a silhouette.
The camera seems to blend into the tree line. If you wanted to create more separation with the tree line, you might consider dodging it. If you wanted to make the camera pop more, you might try creating a selection around the camera, applying the selection to a curve and moving down the black point. This image also converts welll into a monochrome.
See attached. |
Jan 13th |
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| 13 |
Jan 21 |
Comment |
This image makes an interesting abstract. You might want to try converting it into monochrome and explore how the abstract works. |
Jan 13th |
| 13 |
Jan 21 |
Comment |
Barbara
I like the composition, story telling, and use of monochrome for this image. Converting the image to almost two tones creates an interesting visual effect and strong silhouette.
The branch cutting across the lower third of the image is slightly distracting. Would you consider removing it. |
Jan 8th |
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| 13 |
Jan 21 |
Comment |
Timothy
This image brings back memories of the days that I lived in the Harborfront area of Spadina and saw the CN tower from my condo. The skyline has intersting shapes and you have captured one of Toronto's main tourist attractions. The image has good contrast between the buildings and sky.
There appears to hazy lines surrounding the buldings. Thus I checked the image by applying a luminosity mask. I was not sure if these lines were from damage to the original print or whether it was from painting on a mask. Looking with a naked eye, a person probably would not notice it. |
Jan 8th |
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| 13 |
Jan 21 |
Comment |
This is a good example of a silhouette and the clouds add interest but do not overpower the scene.
The green circle draws my attention. Is that the moon? Could its brightness be lowere? |
Jan 8th |
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