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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 34 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
Great concept! I think the liquid edge is well done. You could try using a combination of beveled edge, blur, and directional light reflections to smooth it out a bit more. |
Aug 14th |
| 34 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
Great composition and placement. The color and direction of the light on her dress doesn't match the ambient light. Also, her shadow is a bit strong for the diffuse light that seems to cause it. Neither of these are distracting, just technical details most people won't notice. |
Aug 14th |
| 34 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
I first thought this was smoke, but I do see the anatomical comparison. Great work creating an abstract image from an abstract mechanism! |
Aug 14th |
| 34 |
Aug 25 |
Reply |
Changing the aspect ratio also changes the perspective. Wider focal lengths have more distorted perspective, so the feet on the ground at 37mm will have a narrower perspective on the x and y axis than the floor at 25mm. This makes the feet seem to lift up and forward compared to the room, disrupting the perceived z axis (depth). Expanding the perspective of the subject layer should make it seem more natural. |
Aug 7th |
| 34 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
A great composition. It looks natural within the space except it looks to me like she's floating above the floor (probably due to the difference between the 37mm perspective of the subject vs. the 25mm perspective. of the room. I might have used the perspective tool on the subject to make a slight adjustment.), and the sculpture having no shadow or reflection. The drop shadow problem might be fixed by dropping the shadow, then moving the shadow layer to the proper place, editing it to look right using a mask, and again using some perspective shift. |
Aug 6th |
4 comments - 1 reply for Group 34
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| 68 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
Welcome to the group.
Great symetry and leading lines. Good color and depth. The window is severely broken at the bottom edge, but it is surprisingly comfortable to view, despite the technical error. If the corner of the table was included, it could have made a good TTW. |
Aug 9th |
| 68 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
Not a lot of depth over all, but excellent lines and composition. The window is interrupted in both bottom corners. |
Aug 6th |
| 68 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
Great color and excellent depth through the whole image. I like the TTW look, but there is a violation in the bottom right corner. |
Aug 6th |
| 68 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
The detail adds interest, and adds context to the golden hour lighting. There is a slight window violation at the top edge. |
Aug 6th |
| 68 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
A beautiful location. You've made the most of the W3. The image has good depth front to back.I love the variations of the light. |
Aug 6th |
| 68 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
Interesting perspective distortion. The window is tilted toward the back. Was this processed as a phantogram? |
Aug 6th |
| 68 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
I got some sad news today. Our friend and member David Allen has passed. Rest in peace David. You are missed.
https://www.threadgillmemorial.com/obituaries/David-William-Allen?obId=43834607#/obituaryInfo |
Aug 5th |
7 comments - 0 replies for Group 68
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11 comments - 1 reply Total
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