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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 34 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
I think shadow might help on the glasses to make them feel more natural. Maybe make the glasses slightly smaller as well. To me, the sundial adds only distraction and imbalance. I'd leave it out. |
Jun 20th |
| 34 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
I agree with Gunter, except for the area where two elbows interact. The proportions seem off, making the depth confusing. It's a tiny issue in an otherwise excellent image. Changing it wouldn't make it better. It's already great. |
Jun 20th |
| 34 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
Nicely done. My only complaint is that your vignette is too strong. |
Jun 20th |
| 34 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
I love the concept and the composition. That said, the soft light on the elephant doesn't match the hard light on the leaf, and the flat light on the head flowers doesn't match anything. The brightness of the head flowers overpowers everything else, and the headband seems flat and out of place. I think it would work a lot better without the head flowers, or with them significantly darkened. A global lighting effect of some kind might help bring the elements together. |
Jun 20th |
| 34 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
Your composition is in all ways, wonderful. The sphere and it's contents fit seamlessly. The only thing that seems uncomfortable is that there is no symmetry to the lighting. The shadows and highlights are mismatched in almost every element. For example: the shadow under the sphere doesn't match the one coming from the man, and the highlights on the sphere do not correspond with the shadow it casts. And the white edges of the cracks and bright part of the sky don't match any of those elements.
It is a fantasy image, so pedantic global lighting probably isn't necessary, but it would be helpful for context within the composition. |
Jun 8th |
| 34 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
I absolutely love this. I love the color palette. The leading lines are extraordinary. It has almost overwhelming interest, but still leaves the viewer wondering. The composition around the facial features is extremely compelling. Especially the eye placement.
Wow. |
Jun 8th |
6 comments - 0 replies for Group 34
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| 68 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
Right and left are reversed. Otherwise, the scene is well composed, and the 3d is good. The color is a bit muted, and could use more contrast, but that's just my preference. I often want more color. |
Jun 8th |
| 68 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
It looks like a septic tank, so that isn't milk!
The stereo is good. The fence is unfortunate, but at least it adds to the depth. I see some haze and chromatic aberration in the left image. Unsharp mask might help even it out. |
Jun 8th |
| 68 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
Great color and depth, including inside the flower. It's set too far back for a good phantogram. Also, the close crop makes the black area to the left of the flower a bit distracting. |
Jun 8th |
| 68 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
I love paint pour and marbled art, and I watch a lot of pour videos on youtube. Excellent use of the short stereo base. The background is messy, but it does add depth and interest. I might have done something to create more contrast in the drip. I have the Red Hydrogen 1, which can save in Leia 4v or high resolution SBS. The whole proprietary file thing is one reason I haven't ventured further into the Leia universe. |
Jun 8th |
| 68 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
I love the whole door county and lake Winnebago area. Especially High Cliff. You've captured the feeling of the region well. I particularly like the calmness of the water, the reflection of the Birch trees, and the grasses in the foreground. |
Jun 8th |
| 68 |
Jun 24 |
Comment |
Great 3d and interest. I do notice a luminence mismatch on the bricks behind the man. Since it's basically at the default infinity, it could probably be cloned out. Also, there's the unfortunate telltale fringe shadow from the W3 flash. A small off camera optical slave flash can help soften this phenomenon. If you fix the luminence this would be a good human interest/photojournalism subject, even with the fringe shadow. |
Jun 8th |
6 comments - 0 replies for Group 68
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12 comments - 0 replies Total
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