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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 10 |
Mar 19 |
Comment |
Most attractive image for subtle emotions portrayed by subjects. Really lovely, Would prefer that bright out-of-focus area in lower right were toned down as my eye is distracted by it. Small idea: What about eliminating fringe of hair to right of young man's eye. For me, it seems to compete or be confused with eye lashes. |
Mar 11th |
| 10 |
Mar 19 |
Comment |
Beautiful image of traditional woman. Lovely. I might tone down the white highlights in background around face as my eye seems to go to them. Would also PS out imperfection on chin as I find it competing with amazing dimples. |
Mar 11th |
| 10 |
Mar 19 |
Comment |
I might also experiment with photographing the white blossoms alone for more impact. |
Mar 11th |
| 10 |
Mar 19 |
Comment |
I have participated in several Clemons clases and made a quick edit based on what I learned before reading Donna's important suggestions about this lovely alstroemeria, one of my favorite flowers to photograph. I cropped in, eliminated all border distractions, and increased space at top using PS Context Aware fill. I recall Kathleen emphasizing the importance of giving flowers room to move and breathe. And, looking at this edited image, I would add black space to bottom, too. |
Mar 11th |
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| 10 |
Mar 19 |
Comment |
Here is my quick rendition. Cropped in LR. Added LR Gradient Filter to darken sky. Added LR Radial Filter to surround people on bridge and bridge arch to bring specific focus to this area. Used Filter>Sharpen>Camera shake in Photoshop to increase focus. |
Mar 11th |
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| 10 |
Mar 19 |
Comment |
This scene fascinates me for the complex way the structures are woven together in support of each other. I find the shapes and colors so complementary. And their soft reflection in the rippling water. Agree with Donna's assessment of focus. Also, found sidewalk in lower left to be a bit distracting. |
Mar 11th |
| 10 |
Mar 19 |
Comment |
Fascinating image at first look, but, to my eye, it echoes Donna's input. Hard for my attention to find a place to settle with so much going on. I really like her tighter crop.And the near rider on donkey does not seem grounded to the road. |
Mar 11th |
| 10 |
Mar 19 |
Comment |
Thanks so much, Donna. Really appreciate you suggestion for cropping. Question: Are the motorcycle handle bars and mirror important to tell the story (without my explanation) or does the tight crop make it a better image? |
Mar 11th |
| 10 |
Mar 19 |
Comment |
To my eye, this is a beautiful composition of a delicate blossom. Especially enjoy the back petal softly visible through the front one. I might suggest getting the tip in a bit sharper focus next time and perhaps make the negative space smaller just to compare. |
Mar 8th |
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