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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 41 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
I love this! How perfect for the holidays! Like a Christmas card! Beautifully done! My only suggestion: the snow seems a little too dense under the pumpkin between the two wheels. I know you added that look to create snow flurries, but I not seeing enough motion for the carriage to be moving. In fact, I kind of like how static it looks. It reminds me of a picture in a fairy tale! |
Nov 19th |
| 41 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Thanks Lisa, I agree with you about the urchin creature, he's a little hot. (haha) The jellyfish were interesting though, they were all very
bright white, so I just tried tinting him a softer color. My second version worked a little better. BTW, most of the plants are actually pipe fish. |
Nov 19th |
| 41 |
Nov 19 |
Reply |
Thanks Henry! |
Nov 19th |
| 41 |
Nov 19 |
Reply |
Thanks Kathy, I love the bubbles idea! |
Nov 19th |
| 41 |
Nov 19 |
Reply |
Thanks Brad, I continued to work on this image after submitting this version and it did get a little better. |
Nov 19th |
| 41 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Hi Brad, I think this image has a lot of potential. As the viewer, it's a little hard to follow the connections, even after reading the title. I took the liberty of reworking your images and came up with the VF below. I made all layers B&W since the clouds were tinted with yellow mixed with the B&W bikers, evened out the exposure, then enlarged your friend's profile to make it more dominant in the image. I agree with Lisa that the starburst tends to draw the eye away from the message, and I left it out. Simply a slightly different interpretation. |
Nov 19th |
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