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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 41 |
Jan 19 |
Reply |
Thanks Lisa, I love the idea of one of the vultures on the tree. I agree about the sky, I noticed the noise after the fact. I might try something different. |
Jan 28th |
| 41 |
Jan 19 |
Comment |
Hi Lisa, I'm liking how the trees all come together to look like one vertical tree. I like the colors and the airiness of the "branches". It feels to me to be top-heavy though, but I'm not sure how you could change that.
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Jan 20th |
| 41 |
Jan 19 |
Comment |
Very cute! All you need now is some birthday cake! |
Jan 20th |
| 41 |
Jan 19 |
Comment |
Hi Henry,
I think all you did with the roses in PS works really well as a way to compliment the model. Soft, light and airy compared to that original hedge. The more I looked at the model though, it seemed that the shadows on her face and body were too harsh for the soft and light vignette. By lifting the shadows (in LR), I feel it helps to even out the image. It almost turns into a high key image. |
Jan 18th |
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| 41 |
Jan 19 |
Comment |
Hi Kathy, you have executed the concept of a ghostly vision beautifully. As the viewer, I have become engaged with the idea that this could really be a ghost in the window! The only thing I might recommend is to add a little more contrast (with a touch of clarity in LR). |
Jan 18th |
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| 41 |
Jan 19 |
Reply |
Thanks Brad, I appreciate the comment. Regarding the edge of the hill, do you see it on the right side or left, or both? I'd like to fix what you're seeing. |
Jan 18th |
| 41 |
Jan 19 |
Comment |
Hi Brad,
The overall image has an earthy muted tone of green and gray, which helps the hummingbird to stand out more. But I agree with Sue that the placement of the hummingbird is too high and far off into the corner. Perhaps even flipping the hummer horizontally might help. That upper wing needs a little work as far as blending. |
Jan 18th |
5 comments - 2 replies for Group 41
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5 comments - 2 replies Total
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