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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 81 |
May 20 |
Comment |
Angela, your creativity is outstanding, and this photograph is deep despite its simplicity. The hand and pencil are much sharper than the spring and shadow, and i would like to see the same sharpness in that too. And to have more surrounding what you display, not much, but it seems tight to me. Finally, the story is finished, as the spring shadow drawing is complete, and I then wonder where does it go from here, and I do not know but for the pencil off the paper. I would like to see it incomplete and have my brain start to fill in the next part of the drawing, bringing anticipated action into the scene. Very creative................. |
May 18th |
| 81 |
May 20 |
Comment |
Bonné, the most compelling are the darker areas, and I really like the texture of those areas. The rest is bright for my eyes and I lose the want to keep looking at the details because of that. I would work on the brightness and look to bring out texture, and have the background without the upper right bright spot. |
May 18th |
| 81 |
May 20 |
Comment |
Cheryl, I love the soft sharp painterly way you render your flowers. the flowers and the green leaves are wonderful. I get a little distracted by the background color, losing the flowers. |
May 18th |
| 81 |
May 20 |
Comment |
Hema, great use of lines and curves, and tension, leading me right into the main subject. First i was noticing the colors, and those are compelling. The only thing i was wondering is if you took the shot with a wider lens and then straightened the pillars. |
May 18th |
| 81 |
May 20 |
Comment |
Janet, you nailed it. Lovely picture. the focus is superb. I have the 56 velvet, or i did, and my son has had it since i bought it. you have it mastered. |
May 18th |
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