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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 81 |
Apr 20 |
Comment |
Brent, i love you saw this and shared, and your explanation. it is an environment not normally seen. Cropping in on the sides especially could be helpful, and a tighter crop would be preferable, but the head is not quite sharp, so i think you made a good choice. If you have a sharper shot, i would look for a tighter crop. |
Apr 18th |
| 81 |
Apr 20 |
Comment |
Hema, how beautiful. I love the colors, and the balance. I can feel the flow. Intense and interesting it is. A picture to continue to look at. I like what you did with the bottom left. It seems a little noisy with focus falloff on the upper half, but that is a minor thought, and maybe not even a distraction or issue. Nice. |
Apr 18th |
| 81 |
Apr 20 |
Reply |
good morning, yes it was me. great video. and yes as to the vignetting, as it appears much more of a vignette in this rendering than on the processed version i chose; and thus i agree with the what you are viewing. |
Apr 9th |
| 81 |
Apr 20 |
Reply |
Janet, it was a preset in Topaz, but i will see if i can find its naming, and i will update you. |
Apr 8th |
| 81 |
Apr 20 |
Reply |
Well Angela, keep knocking them out, and in this case, down. For you to know, I do not read other comments, until after i make my own. I want to convey independently what i see. Thus i did not read Noel's comments until after you mentioned he also made reference to the sloping. Seems it must be so then. |
Apr 5th |
| 81 |
Apr 20 |
Reply |
thanks Angela. wonderful shots, and website she has. thanks for sharing. |
Apr 5th |
| 81 |
Apr 20 |
Comment |
Cheryl, nicely captured. excellent focus. i find the bottom right distracting, and suggest rotating it till that is eliminated, and the benefit of more tension by the angle i think would be pleasing. Maybe bring up the whites, bring more dynamic drama getting more separation. |
Apr 5th |
| 81 |
Apr 20 |
Comment |
Janet, a lovely shot. I like the way it tapers off and the focus is on the left flower. i love the softness and luminosity. well captured, and even better rendering. |
Apr 5th |
| 81 |
Apr 20 |
Comment |
Bonné, you nailed the critical focus. Interesting, and i would find it more interesting with more of a diagonal in the direction you already have. then i would see the shadows which are good, and would eliminate the bottom right that does not add to the shot, at least for me. I would think that would create more tension. If that does not work, then maybe crop some off the bottom. |
Apr 5th |
| 81 |
Apr 20 |
Comment |
Angela, i love your creativity and vision. well done and excellent shutter speed, reflections, and energy. Excellent. Now for some things i think. seems to not be level but sloping down to the right, so to me that is a distraction taking me out of the scene. Then i thought it needed something else for me, and that is would have liked to have seen a finger pushing the first domino, as then i would feel a stronger story. Maybe a little more open at the top, some breathing room. i would not have thought of such a creative shot, so no criticism, just a few suggestions. |
Apr 5th |
| 81 |
Apr 20 |
Comment |
Angela, i love your creativity and vision. well done and excellent shutter speed, reflections, and energy. Excellent. Now for some things i think. seems to not be level but sloping down to the right, so to me that is a distraction taking me out of the scene. Then i thought it needed something else for me, and that is would have liked to have seen a finger pushing the first domino, as then i would feel a stronger story. Maybe a little more open at the top, some breathing room. i would not have thought of such a creative shot, so no criticism, just a few suggestions. |
Apr 5th |
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